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40 oz love song for a gee
I'm at a rave
lookin like a slave
high on chronic
body smells like vomit
eyes somewhat demonic
so shut you're mouth
you dirty slut
cock in your mouth
straight out yo but
you cough an gag
while I bust a nut
true love
the length
of a solemn fuck
lookin like a slave
high on chronic
body smells like vomit
eyes somewhat demonic
so shut you're mouth
you dirty slut
cock in your mouth
straight out yo but
you cough an gag
while I bust a nut
true love
the length
of a solemn fuck
Published 2nd Mar 2013
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2nd Mar 2013 00:12am
2nd Mar 2013 00:15am
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2013 00:58am
Damn.....where was my invite lol...."true love" and gag put in together nicely:))))
2nd Mar 2013 1:26am
do you need an invite,
remember the heroin parties in 63?
pussy is all great
see you at eight
bitch..
hehehe cheers chilipino
remember the heroin parties in 63?
pussy is all great
see you at eight
bitch..
hehehe cheers chilipino
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2013 6:51pm
On first read it just seemed a bit sick but on second, I heard the deeper bits echo and by the third..
I really dig this...different-but good!
I really dig this...different-but good!
10th Mar 2013 9:13am
10th Mar 2013 9:08am
From an acorn a mighty oak can grow ;-)
Gagging...boasting again! Made me laugh and on a Sunday am.
Terry
And the next on Judge.
The decisions we make dictate the lives we lead.
Both good reads.
Terry
Gagging...boasting again! Made me laugh and on a Sunday am.
Terry
And the next on Judge.
The decisions we make dictate the lives we lead.
Both good reads.
Terry
10th Mar 2013 9:35am
terry..
thank you for your slightly suggestive, somewhat thought tickling comment..
glad to see you could create a Sunday am laugh and find some good in the addition of a seamingly unrelated comment..
I'm starting to think that some personal interpretations of poetry can be a lot more entertaining and creative than their fictitious influences..
thank you for your slightly suggestive, somewhat thought tickling comment..
glad to see you could create a Sunday am laugh and find some good in the addition of a seamingly unrelated comment..
I'm starting to think that some personal interpretations of poetry can be a lot more entertaining and creative than their fictitious influences..
10th Mar 2013 11:16am
I was putting a twist on this
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=an%20acorn
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=an%20acorn
10th Mar 2013 11:50am
lol so kind of you,
and with such an opinion only leaves me to thought..
ok thought...
oh look, something shiney..
and with such an opinion only leaves me to thought..
ok thought...
oh look, something shiney..
