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Death
death is dark
death is great
deep despair
a lot of pain
death is great
death is free
come take me
from this shithole land
suicide
it goes through my head everyday
fulfilling it with dreams and hope
maybe someday
ill behappy on this earth
but for now
death is dark
death is great
death take me away
from this hell hole
death is great
deep despair
a lot of pain
death is great
death is free
come take me
from this shithole land
suicide
it goes through my head everyday
fulfilling it with dreams and hope
maybe someday
ill behappy on this earth
but for now
death is dark
death is great
death take me away
from this hell hole
Published 25th Feb 2013
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25th Feb 2013 10:58pm
what to say...this snaps your breath away. whether it's appropriate to say 'good poem', I don't know, but it sure is honest. It's the courage in the poems that make them what they are. :)
26th Feb 2013 00:05am
I really like it, mainly because i can relate to the emotion behind the poem
26th Feb 2013 6:41am
amazing! this is.. wow, you told my life story, you are amazing oh my goth!! i love it!!!
-raven xx
-raven xx
27th Feb 2013 00:18am
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23rd Jun 2013 11:45pm
That poem hit home right now! I was searching about death and suicide and came across this site and the dark poems. I am feeling the way right now as I type. Maybe I will post my death poem instead of taking my life.
