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Hymn to the sun
Hail to thee, O mighty King of the East!
Thou who art the all-consuming fire.
Thou who makest man full of life.
Hail to thee, O bringer of the dawn!
Thou who dispellest the darkness.
Thou who art the source of light.
Hail to thee, O bestower of warmth!
Thou who slayest the coldness.
Thou who art ever dying and reborn.
Hail to thee, O mighty Sun!
Hail!
Published 25th Feb 2013
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25th Feb 2013 3:20pm
Really got across an 'all powerful'
feeling of the sun.
Love the traditional sense in this poem,
haven't read one like this is ages :)
feeling of the sun.
Love the traditional sense in this poem,
haven't read one like this is ages :)
25th Feb 2013 7:16pm
25th Feb 2013 7:35pm
Anonymous
25th Feb 2013 7:25pm
I really liked this poem of yours, I thought of the way the pagans see(k) the sun.
Beautiful ode
Beautiful ode
1st Mar 2013 8:01am
You talk of one of my gods. ATOO. in a delightfull manner. Well appreciated it. May she live for ever and keep all warm to the. Touch. Nice in deed and do agree whith commenters above. Short to the point and altimentlh true.
