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The Return (Working Title)
The Return
Dearest moon watch o’er my tomb
Let not the words fade/wear away
For one day I shall return
To walk among men (once) again
Whitest snow through cold winds blow
Buffet against my stone
Branches sway on a dreary day
Foretelling my return
Tears that fall keep warm the ground
Let me forget my toil
My stirring soul after centuries old
Of slumber 'neath the soil
Dearest moon watch o’er my tomb
Let not the words fade/wear away
For one day I shall return
To walk among men (once) again
Whitest snow through cold winds blow
Buffet against my stone
Branches sway on a dreary day
Foretelling my return
Tears that fall keep warm the ground
Let me forget my toil
My stirring soul after centuries old
Of slumber 'neath the soil
Published 22nd Feb 2013
| Edited 23rd Feb 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2013 5:49am
This is a cool song!
Sounds like it may have an acoustic feel to it.
Cool effort, poet!
Keep at it and thanks for sharing ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. And a rolling welcome to this cool site!
Do hope you'll have loadsa fun.....
Sounds like it may have an acoustic feel to it.
Cool effort, poet!
Keep at it and thanks for sharing ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. And a rolling welcome to this cool site!
Do hope you'll have loadsa fun.....
23rd Feb 2013 9:51pm
Thank you!
And....acoustic indeed, been working on the music for it the last couple days on my trusty Epiphone Hummingbird.
CS
And....acoustic indeed, been working on the music for it the last couple days on my trusty Epiphone Hummingbird.
CS
