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The Socratic Seagull
I fled before dawn
racing my heart
down gray weathered Cape Cod steps
onto wet cool squishing sand
Then I dashed
between razorblades of ammophilia
towards frothy ebb tide
and
serenity
“Why do you chase the tide?” asked
a prying gull
preening proper
balanced on one leg, yet still professorial
“Are you talking to me?”
I responded
shocked
not that a gull could talk
but rather by
the lunar gravity of his erudite tone
“Of course I’m talking to you!”
he retorted
so pedantically
Then the bird chided,
“My hooting
is reserved
for gulls, owls, and other scholarly birds!”
He then folded his wings impatiently
still awaiting an insightful reply
“Well, I just need
answers!”
was my timid, empty response
The Belcher’s Gull ruffled his feathers
vigorously
most indignant, as if to say:
Why on Earth do you think
the oceans could ever fill up
all of your insufficiency!
Oddly lightened and enlightened, I stopped running
away from life
its questions
and myself.
racing my heart
down gray weathered Cape Cod steps
onto wet cool squishing sand
Then I dashed
between razorblades of ammophilia
towards frothy ebb tide
and
serenity
“Why do you chase the tide?” asked
a prying gull
preening proper
balanced on one leg, yet still professorial
“Are you talking to me?”
I responded
shocked
not that a gull could talk
but rather by
the lunar gravity of his erudite tone
“Of course I’m talking to you!”
he retorted
so pedantically
Then the bird chided,
“My hooting
is reserved
for gulls, owls, and other scholarly birds!”
He then folded his wings impatiently
still awaiting an insightful reply
“Well, I just need
answers!”
was my timid, empty response
The Belcher’s Gull ruffled his feathers
vigorously
most indignant, as if to say:
Why on Earth do you think
the oceans could ever fill up
all of your insufficiency!
Oddly lightened and enlightened, I stopped running
away from life
its questions
and myself.
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Re: The Socratic Seagull
22nd Feb 2013 10:50am
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22nd Feb 2013 10:52am
Thanks Magdalena ... another homework assignment. Read a collection of work by Mary Oliver and then write a poem in her style and voice. I present it on Monday ... wish me luck!
Re: The Socratic Seagull
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 10:51am
You put me there and I heard Sir.
Enjoyed...Strider
Enjoyed...Strider
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22nd Feb 2013 10:52am
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22nd Feb 2013 12:20pm
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22nd Feb 2013 12:33pm
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 12:29pm
Fabulous piece!
Much enjoyed it, especially that last part there:
*Oddly lightened and enlightened, I stopped running
away from life
its questions
and myself.
Love the tone and flow.
Please keep at it, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Much enjoyed it, especially that last part there:
*Oddly lightened and enlightened, I stopped running
away from life
its questions
and myself.
Love the tone and flow.
Please keep at it, poet!
Cheers
Tidespotter
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re: Re: The Socratic Seagull
22nd Feb 2013 12:34pm
Thanks Tidespotter50 ... could your name perhaps influence you a bit on this particular poem? ;-)
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 12:40pm
Oh, how so?
The 'tide' part or the 'spotter' part of me name.....which, do ye think now?
Or maybe....just the '50' part?
;-)
Och, just joking, ok.
Please don't mind an old fool like me.
I did enjoy yer piece there, poet...Socratic and all.....
And I dig yer response....cool and all....TIDE-like :-) :-)
Peace be to ye
Tidespotter
The 'tide' part or the 'spotter' part of me name.....which, do ye think now?
Or maybe....just the '50' part?
;-)
Och, just joking, ok.
Please don't mind an old fool like me.
I did enjoy yer piece there, poet...Socratic and all.....
And I dig yer response....cool and all....TIDE-like :-) :-)
Peace be to ye
Tidespotter
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Re: The Socratic Seagull
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 3:56pm
This is wonderful!
I found it so enjoyable to read.
You are getting better with every poem.
Talking to a seagull is so original....
Most poets would not do it
but you carried it off well
Kitty
I found it so enjoyable to read.
You are getting better with every poem.
Talking to a seagull is so original....
Most poets would not do it
but you carried it off well
Kitty
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22nd Feb 2013 4:07pm
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22nd Feb 2013 7:47pm
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22nd Feb 2013 9:04pm
Thanks JAZZMANOR. Keeping thinking about summer ... it's not too far away!!!
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22nd Feb 2013 9:47pm
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23rd Feb 2013 00:09am
Thanks Atakti. About the class, maybe you should consult a socratic seagull? ;-)
This homework assignment involved reading "A Thousand Mornings", a collection of Mary Oliver's poetry. I then had to write a paper analyzing her style and work. Finally, I had to write a poem emulating her style and what I learned from her poetry ... eh, voila!!!
This homework assignment involved reading "A Thousand Mornings", a collection of Mary Oliver's poetry. I then had to write a paper analyzing her style and work. Finally, I had to write a poem emulating her style and what I learned from her poetry ... eh, voila!!!
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2013 6:06pm
:) Awesome Ink! Message was lovely!
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re: Re: The Socratic Seagull
23rd Feb 2013 6:30pm
Thanks so much Sage. Glad you liked my sagacious poem! Sorry, couldn't resist ...
Re: The Socratic Seagull
Anonymous
24th Feb 2013 5:39pm
Diggin this ink, LeColonel!
Your lines; "Then I dashed
between razorblades of ammophilia
towards frothy ebb tide
and
serenity" ~so amazing! :)
Your lines; "Then I dashed
between razorblades of ammophilia
towards frothy ebb tide
and
serenity" ~so amazing! :)
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re: Re: The Socratic Seagull
24th Feb 2013 7:06pm