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To broke to express
Inflamed with passion
Love reaction
Mystic being
Bleeding eyes seeing
Every movement made
Lips part like art
Gasoline start
It'll end with a broken heart
A web well weaved
Disaster impending,
I'm to condesending
Love reaction
Mystic being
Bleeding eyes seeing
Every movement made
Lips part like art
Gasoline start
It'll end with a broken heart
A web well weaved
Disaster impending,
I'm to condesending
Published 22nd Feb 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 8:43am
*Last line: would it be 'too'?
Every movement made
Lips part like art
Gasoline start
It'll end with a broken heart
I enjoyed this, your work has rhythm,
and unique lines free of cliche's
Very well written,
Scribbler.
Every movement made
Lips part like art
Gasoline start
It'll end with a broken heart
I enjoyed this, your work has rhythm,
and unique lines free of cliche's
Very well written,
Scribbler.
