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22nd Feb 2013 3:36am
I think this is really cool, I like how it's short. It punctuates the piece really well.
22nd Feb 2013 4:03am
oh my gosh. Don't do it! This is so sinister and convincing. Good composition.
22nd Feb 2013 6:09am
very clever it stings the Sunset senses and lips the dawn like sky too man...good stuff
22nd Feb 2013 6:21am
