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Pay him with love and care
Coming home from the burning sun
Lost, lonely and looking forlorn
Dusty heat of many days
Sites no longer to be bourn
Prison left behind at last
Marching on sand aflame
Confusion of fear then felt
No holding of useless shame
Shrugging off that heavy coat
Hanging of all duty now done
A heavy price his life did pay
Now hoping for future fun
Heartfelt thank him for all he did
Battles he had to taste
Pay him with love and care
Your life that he kept safe
LavenderSilk
Lost, lonely and looking forlorn
Dusty heat of many days
Sites no longer to be bourn
Prison left behind at last
Marching on sand aflame
Confusion of fear then felt
No holding of useless shame
Shrugging off that heavy coat
Hanging of all duty now done
A heavy price his life did pay
Now hoping for future fun
Heartfelt thank him for all he did
Battles he had to taste
Pay him with love and care
Your life that he kept safe
LavenderSilk
Published 21st Feb 2013
| Edited 31st Dec 2014
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21st Feb 2013 9:00pm
Could be about a military wife whose husband is back from war, or the wife of any breadwinning man whose work (eg building) can be dangerous.
22nd Feb 2013 8:57pm
It was for a friend leaving the forces after many years. It was in respect of his wife to their son. But yes the intention could be for a wife of lot of hard working men doing a dangerous job to keep us all safe.
23rd Feb 2013 4:59pm
29th Mar 2013 11:56pm
Something about your ink that I can't quite explain! Unique, soft, desirable to read!
Can't find the proper terminology! Love it! :)
Can't find the proper terminology! Love it! :)
31st Mar 2013 12:08pm
I have been given to understand that I write child like. I write stories mostly but do like to play with words. Maybe that is what your looking for. childlike. Lol.
19th Nov 2014 3:10am
suggest editing out small words like "the" . Tends to amp up the power of images.
31st Dec 2014 2:49pm
