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relentless insanity
encrypted delusions
utter confusion
paranoid skeptic alone with my own illusions
estranged from mental clarity
haunting thoughts
plagued with insanity
spiraling down
the voices are calling me
deeper into the abyss of a tormented reality
utter confusion
paranoid skeptic alone with my own illusions
estranged from mental clarity
haunting thoughts
plagued with insanity
spiraling down
the voices are calling me
deeper into the abyss of a tormented reality
Published 21st Feb 2013
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21st Feb 2013 6:51am
Pretty good, litte short but it is okay. Shorter poems usually are more appealing to people. While it could be better I like it.
21st Feb 2013 3:45pm
thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It seems I generally do write short/er poems. I have found its actually rather difficult for me to write longer ones possibly due to the simple fact my attention span is so short and my mind tends to get cluttered with so many off topic thoughts.
