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every thrust
was met with
equal intensity
tongues dueled
hands clasped
legs tangled
beaded sweats
trickled down on
each others form
hunger fulfilled
pinnacle reached...
was met with
equal intensity
tongues dueled
hands clasped
legs tangled
beaded sweats
trickled down on
each others form
hunger fulfilled
pinnacle reached...
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20th Feb 2013 3:22pm
Wow, I just happened to picture out the whole thing... and its sweetly made. I like this thoroughbred. ;)
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23rd Feb 2013 12:13pm
Minimalism so strips down the constituent parts that an elemental aesthetic arises like mental magma, finally evolving into such bold lines and structure that the viewer has little choice but to see the unutterably flawless beauty in the design and execution of the work: elegant and precise, a fluid dancing of the elements and principles of design.
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2013 4:13am
That was colored with all types of sexiness... I loved: *hunger fulfilled
pinnacle reached...*
pinnacle reached...*

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Anonymous
7th Mar 2013 3:57am
:your words teased us all, we plea for more!X&O

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