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Night sky
I stare at the empty space
between distant stars
A deep longing is felt as
I gaze upon that lonely void.
To be as nothing, to be as
the dust of long dead stars.
To forever float in the endless
starlit solitude of space.
That is what I dream of when
I behold the clear night sky.
between distant stars
A deep longing is felt as
I gaze upon that lonely void.
To be as nothing, to be as
the dust of long dead stars.
To forever float in the endless
starlit solitude of space.
That is what I dream of when
I behold the clear night sky.
Published 19th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 8:20am
A dreamlike atmosphere, I see the starlit night when I read this, nicely written!
19th Feb 2013 5:39pm
19th Feb 2013 9:49am
It took me a while and a couple of reads, to really feel the dark entwined with the words.
Striking read as usual.
To be as nothing, to be as
the dust of long dead stars.
To forever float in the endless
starlit solitude of space.
Very well written.
Striking read as usual.
To be as nothing, to be as
the dust of long dead stars.
To forever float in the endless
starlit solitude of space.
Very well written.
19th Feb 2013 5:42pm
Thank you for a great comment! Yes, it is dark and not quite based on my own feelings. But I do like to look at the sky. Who doesn't?
