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The ghosts and I
The ghosts and I huddle in moonbeams,
discussing ethereal shifts in spirit.
They inquire after how I am,
inspecting my soul for trauma.
"I'm alive" is stated once,
twice, then thrice.
Always and only when darkness
settles deathly, do the ghosts arrive;
consciousness committing suicide
in order to channel there.
Lucid hands betray crystalline grief,
and yet I've never felt so much at home.
Icicles suspended on spineless words,
cause one casualty every breath.
The ice age massacre has begun.
discussing ethereal shifts in spirit.
They inquire after how I am,
inspecting my soul for trauma.
"I'm alive" is stated once,
twice, then thrice.
Always and only when darkness
settles deathly, do the ghosts arrive;
consciousness committing suicide
in order to channel there.
Lucid hands betray crystalline grief,
and yet I've never felt so much at home.
Icicles suspended on spineless words,
cause one casualty every breath.
The ice age massacre has begun.
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Re: The ghosts and I
Anonymous
17th Feb 2013 9:07pm
One more magic and surreal composition, love it!

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17th Feb 2013 10:23pm
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2013 9:12pm
I adore this brilliant write, Scribbler. I would put it on my reading list, if I could. The words, the phrasing & the story... my kind of poem!!! Love it! :)

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17th Feb 2013 10:24pm
Re: The ghosts and I
17th Feb 2013 11:10pm
Moments of clarity in a life are understated. Well scribed snapshot of such a moment.
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17th Feb 2013 11:26pm
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18th Feb 2013 2:54pm
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18th Feb 2013 6:18pm
Re: The ghosts and I
18th Feb 2013 6:44pm
"The ghosts and I huddle in moonbeams,
discussing ethereal shifts in spirit.
They inquire after how I am,
inspecting my soul for trauma.
"I'm alive" is stated once,
twice, then thrice."<----from that beginning stanza, I knew this read would be pleasurable!!
Wonderful Ink! xoxo
discussing ethereal shifts in spirit.
They inquire after how I am,
inspecting my soul for trauma.
"I'm alive" is stated once,
twice, then thrice."<----from that beginning stanza, I knew this read would be pleasurable!!
Wonderful Ink! xoxo
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18th Feb 2013 9:14pm
Re: The ghosts and I
19th Feb 2013 6:09am
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19th Feb 2013 8:55am
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19th Feb 2013 9:44am
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19th Feb 2013 9:50am
Re: The ghosts and I
19th Feb 2013 3:52pm
"Lucid hands betray crystalline grief"
breath-taking words, and the whole is soulfully melancholy.
breath-taking words, and the whole is soulfully melancholy.
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re: Re: The ghosts and I
19th Feb 2013 3:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2025 10:45pm
27th Feb 2013 4:43pm
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