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Concussed
Are you haunted?
How’s your head?
A fall like that should’ve left you dead
Are you rigid?
Are you cold?
Be more careful, you’re getting old
Snip, stitch here
Snip, stitch there
86 stitches, they had to cut your hair
Cat scan time in X-rayville
Diagnosis: a thousand pills
Pop, pop here
Pop, vomit there
All part of the wear and tear
How’s your head?
A fall like that should’ve left you dead
Are you rigid?
Are you cold?
Be more careful, you’re getting old
Snip, stitch here
Snip, stitch there
86 stitches, they had to cut your hair
Cat scan time in X-rayville
Diagnosis: a thousand pills
Pop, pop here
Pop, vomit there
All part of the wear and tear
Published 15th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 8:04pm
Wow, acerbic...
Like the style, Leaton.
Keep penning, ok.
Cheers
Tidespotter
Like the style, Leaton.
Keep penning, ok.
Cheers
Tidespotter
18th Feb 2013 00:09am
