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Go ahead
And tell your lover
To keep the car running,
Do me a favour
Don't lock the door
On your way out
I'd rather not hear
The familiar jingle
Of your keys
Hitting the bluebird chain
I gave you on
Our anniversary.
And tell your lover
To keep the car running,
Do me a favour
Don't lock the door
On your way out
I'd rather not hear
The familiar jingle
Of your keys
Hitting the bluebird chain
I gave you on
Our anniversary.
Published 15th Feb 2013
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15th Feb 2013 6:25pm
Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 8:23pm
Oh man, how poignant is this....
Cool effort, K :-)
Really like the terse energy you managed to place in the clipped lines.
Well done, please do pen on!
Cheers
Tidespotter
Cool effort, K :-)
Really like the terse energy you managed to place in the clipped lines.
Well done, please do pen on!
Cheers
Tidespotter
15th Feb 2013 8:23pm
