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Exhausted
Exhausted
Tired, weak
I need sleep
I close my eyes
trying to count some sheep
I open my eyes
No more sleep
Weak, tired
Exhausted
Published 15th Feb 2013
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15th Feb 2013 5:49am
So simple but so insanely readable. I love the symmetry of this style, and I've rarely seen anything so elegantly composed. I like it a lot, thanks for submitting it.
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15th Feb 2013 6:40am
The last word dropped heavily, perfectly.
Talented work; I love the fast pace
that I could read with.
Well done,
Scribbler.
Talented work; I love the fast pace
that I could read with.
Well done,
Scribbler.
