"...Climbing..."

Excellent! An erotic turn-on that was the perfect way to start my day. (Although, I will need to stay seated at my desk for the next little while before I can appear before a class of students.)

I enjoyed reading this.  It presents an image of "a sea of ecstasy" that we all dream about --even lust about.

Jay

Oh you are too much Jay! ;) You making me blush..;) Seriously tho, I made it rise?... Gee, that really makes me feel good 2 know..;) And I'm thrilled 2 kno you enjoyed..:)

I seem to always rise to your writing --sometimes in appreciation of the work itself and sometimes for other reasons.

Jay

Lady, in those times that I do pass through your creative space, i am impressed at the way you weave your colored words into the fabric creating a complete and pointed patchwork.  Always keeps to the theme and illicits a particular sensuality.  Mmmmm....the illiteration of those "I's":

"Sometimes when I'm climbing
 Onto your dick
I like pausing
 Right at the tip
With the head flicking
 At my pussy lips
Love looking
 In your eyes
  As I slide
 Down onto it... "

How those "i's" make me tingle as you:

Climb onto my dick or
pause right at the tip.....
My head flicks at your pussy lips
I really "feel" heaven when you slide down on to it.  "I" concur that with brother J. as my meat stick seems to be properly wedged against  the underside of my desk right now as well.  Quite hard, pulse throbbing and head dripping.  

Bravo LL.  You are that first girl I ever slow danced with ; )  Wow.....

Great write!

And just like Jay, you r too much as well! Blushing and smiling is all i can do..;) Thanx 4 stopping by and commenting, creatively so, i might add..;) Much appreciated;)

I had this feeling that even riding roller coasters in my youth something was missing!

Even the way you placed the words here speaks of sensuality.

Delicious write.

:) :) :) Thank you for that, and as always your words are much appreciated;)

great sensual write raw and visual

Not bad, it was raw and sensual.