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venenum - cassus

(heart) vacuum's [i]Monolog
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i am all and all is nothing at all...
without me you are alone... with me you are done...
i kept your dreams in your desires...
if you do use of self-denial... you will loose yourself...
i am the dreaming sky... i am the botmless ground you stand
the red sky pouring down - invisible rain,
the red ground draining your blood - yoru untamed feelings.

i am the bottle in your hand - with an empty content
in your hand... and the next one.
i am the astray with full content...
in your vains and in your mind - mindstroke
the birth of you sadness in your hapiness
the forgoten body you leave in the dark... when you hug me without care
i am the guilty that always becomes innocent in your sight
full of empty content
and full with memmorial times

back off and you will be alive... come with me without time

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Written by UzumakiSamael

Published 26th Aug 2010

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Interesting. :)

jadielue (Jade.)

26th Aug 2010 2:34pm

It's an interesting poem, indeed. But awesome nevertheless. :) I loved the line, "I am the guilty, that always becomes innocent in your sight." It sounds like a volitale relationship, that was doomed for disaster but you both always give in, no matter what. A sort of tainted desire. Good job! :)