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Okay, if this is how
okay---
if this is how it's gonna be
i'll say my piece and
have it over with
you don't want to
make the first move
or be the one to blame
for us falliing into
each othersd arms and
i would never want
to be the one
you hate forever
for making you untrue
so why go on teasing me
i'm weak to tell the truth
and i can't take it
o.k.?
if this is how it's gonna be
i'll say my piece and
have it over with
you don't want to
make the first move
or be the one to blame
for us falliing into
each othersd arms and
i would never want
to be the one
you hate forever
for making you untrue
so why go on teasing me
i'm weak to tell the truth
and i can't take it
o.k.?
Published 9th Feb 2013
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9th Feb 2013 6:09pm
Like dangling a carrot Faith, so unfair. Well expressed and penned piece. :)
9th Feb 2013 6:15pm
Again, I thank you for your wonderful comments. I always appreciate what you have to say, Magdalena. :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 6:15pm
A lovely write & I love the tone in this poem. Great read, Faith! :)
9th Feb 2013 6:23pm
Thank you so much, Carlene. I appreciate your lovely comments as always :)
Faith
Faith
10th Feb 2013 3:23am
10th Feb 2013 4:35pm
I'm touched that you would say that though I am just a simple poet who is honored to have you for a friend :)
10th Feb 2013 3:20pm
10th Feb 2013 4:37pm
