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crossfire
dear gentleman
don't tempt me to take
chances with my heart
for someone from
my other life has torn
my heart apart and
the world has just gone out
if you think someone
is sleeping it may be
someone is dead
but i'd rather you
slip into my bed
than to get caught
in the crossfire
inside my head
don't tempt me to take
chances with my heart
for someone from
my other life has torn
my heart apart and
the world has just gone out
if you think someone
is sleeping it may be
someone is dead
but i'd rather you
slip into my bed
than to get caught
in the crossfire
inside my head
Published 9th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 6:01pm
I love the way you've rhymed this piece, Faith. Very effectively done! The ending's wonderful. Great poem! :)
9th Feb 2013 6:12pm
Thank you so much, Carlene. I'm honored by your wonderful remarks. :)
Faith
Faith
9th Feb 2013 6:10pm
"get caught in the crossfire in ones head" is a risky thing...Great pen Faith :)
9th Feb 2013 6:13pm
Anonymous
10th Feb 2013 9:44am
Very nice, like a bit of a wicked love spell....
Much enjoyed, faith!
Much enjoyed, faith!
10th Feb 2013 4:11pm
10th Feb 2013 3:19pm
