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The evil within
A mind stained with hellish fire,
a body full of sickening desire.
A soul that stare through callus eyes,
a wicked mouth that speaketh lies.
A hand that doeth only evil deeds
for the heart within, on pain it feeds.
Of this corruption we see naught,
the truth ignored and never sought.
a body full of sickening desire.
A soul that stare through callus eyes,
a wicked mouth that speaketh lies.
A hand that doeth only evil deeds
for the heart within, on pain it feeds.
Of this corruption we see naught,
the truth ignored and never sought.
Published 6th Feb 2013
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6th Feb 2013 6:41am
Good morning,
you've been very dark recently.
In my opinion this is the best poem
of all that I have read.
'Of this corruption we see naught,
the truth ignored and never sought. '
Truth.
Very well written.
you've been very dark recently.
In my opinion this is the best poem
of all that I have read.
'Of this corruption we see naught,
the truth ignored and never sought. '
Truth.
Very well written.
6th Feb 2013 6:48am
Good morning!
Your comment makes me very happy. Do you mean this is the best of my poems you've read? In any case I am immensely honored by your comment.
Your comment makes me very happy. Do you mean this is the best of my poems you've read? In any case I am immensely honored by your comment.
It is indeed, so far at least;
it ranks highly on those that I
have read by others also :)
I'm anticipating the wonders next
to be created :)
it ranks highly on those that I
have read by others also :)
I'm anticipating the wonders next
to be created :)
Wow! :) It's not my own favorite but after your comments I'm very glad I wrote it.
6th Feb 2013 8:33am
6th Feb 2013 7:24pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 1:48pm
This one I liked a lot, both the meaning of it and the words itself. The use of the old english makes it a bit classical
6th Feb 2013 7:25pm
6th Feb 2013 5:46pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 9:40pm
What a dark and truthful write. Enjoyed. :)
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