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Apocalyptic Love.
A matriarchal covenance, doused with human stain.
A solicitous defiance, fed by punctured vein.
It pours forth from your soul, a portal of true feeling.
An overly used Omega, a rag-doll that's still reeling.
A unhealed wound of little worth, a place of violet shame.
Within the womb of the Apocalypse, I am left craving your disdain.
A solicitous defiance, fed by punctured vein.
It pours forth from your soul, a portal of true feeling.
An overly used Omega, a rag-doll that's still reeling.
A unhealed wound of little worth, a place of violet shame.
Within the womb of the Apocalypse, I am left craving your disdain.
Published 23rd Aug 2010
| Edited 24th Aug 2010
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24th Aug 2010 3:16am
Please comment and critique, they are both much appreciated! Thanks for reading, jadielue. :)
24th Aug 2010 11:04am
I think the last word "distain" is meant to be spelled "disdain", but other than that, my favourite lines are the second two. Powerful images throughout, especially the end. [:
24th Aug 2010 11:11am
Thanks so much for that! I totally missed that typo, lol, typical me :). I am glad you like it.
24th Aug 2010 4:31pm
matriachal!! i love the beging
strong images... rught... but not that rought to dissapoint you... well made!
strong images... rught... but not that rought to dissapoint you... well made!
Why thank you! I know, I love the word "matriarchal" too, its awesome,lol. :)
25th Aug 2010 4:37pm
Adore " a unhealed wound of little worth, a place of violet shame" its genius, am in awe!!!
26th Aug 2010 3:03am
