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even when i'm far removed from you
Even when I'm far removed from you
(distance between hearts
can not be measured)
I am not far from you in thought
our minds are peculiar things
I can reach out and
touch you
and if lovers can think each
others thoughts I hear you
your love is mine and mine to keep
I have a special compartment inside
my heart for it (even if I'm
far removed from you)
(distance between hearts
can not be measured)
I am not far from you in thought
our minds are peculiar things
I can reach out and
touch you
and if lovers can think each
others thoughts I hear you
your love is mine and mine to keep
I have a special compartment inside
my heart for it (even if I'm
far removed from you)
Published 5th Feb 2013
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5th Feb 2013 4:49pm
The mind can travel even if the body cannot. Wonderful heartfelt piece Faith. :)
5th Feb 2013 5:04pm
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 5:13pm
Lovely worded poem by your pen, Faith.
Feelings are strongest even through distance
Feelings are strongest even through distance
5th Feb 2013 5:25pm
5th Feb 2013 5:40pm
Such a beautifully tender piece, Faith!
Sometimes the spirit can move you, deeper than the physcial could ever flow. :)
Sometimes the spirit can move you, deeper than the physcial could ever flow. :)
9th Feb 2013 6:30pm
You are so right about the spirit, Lady Rain. So happy to see you. thanks for your lovely comments. they mean a lot! :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 10:46pm
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9th Feb 2013 6:32pm
Thank you, Gabe. I'm honored by your wonderful remarks. I truly am ! :)
Faith xoxo
Faith xoxo
Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 2:09am
Truly lovely pen & expression, Faith. I love the thought behind this, in particular:
distance between hearts
can not be measured)
A beautiful poem! :)
Carlene
distance between hearts
can not be measured)
A beautiful poem! :)
Carlene
9th Feb 2013 6:33pm
Thank you very much, Carlene. Your lovely comments really touched me :)
Faith
Faith
6th Feb 2013 6:08pm
9th Feb 2013 6:34pm
