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Dragon Dreams
Choke on ashes, fiery and hot,
let it claw at your throat
and let it devour your horrid soul.
Dragon dreams will have you
drowning in burning despair.
Lifeless and blank you'll be.
They will be there to see the light
in your eyes flicker in fear,
mess with me and you'll be facing
dragon dreams...
let it claw at your throat
and let it devour your horrid soul.
Dragon dreams will have you
drowning in burning despair.
Lifeless and blank you'll be.
They will be there to see the light
in your eyes flicker in fear,
mess with me and you'll be facing
dragon dreams...
Published 5th Feb 2013
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5th Feb 2013 5:44am
If your going to use punctuation,
it'd be a good idea to use it the whole way through. For example:
'Choke on ashes, fiery and hot,
let it claw at your throat
and let it devour your horrid soul.
Dragon dreams will have you...'
I like the poem, lots of imagery; a unique idea too.
Well written,
Scribbler
it'd be a good idea to use it the whole way through. For example:
'Choke on ashes, fiery and hot,
let it claw at your throat
and let it devour your horrid soul.
Dragon dreams will have you...'
I like the poem, lots of imagery; a unique idea too.
Well written,
Scribbler
5th Feb 2013 2:21pm
6th Feb 2013 10:14pm
