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Forever
I wonder if I'll ever see forever
seen some glimpses before
and I thought my world would be perfect
was it just a dream
a wish on a star that I never actually reached
I held on to hope
kept searching for it in your smile
your eyes
wanted to believe the tears where joyful
and that you could be taught to wipe them away
my fault for believing in you
and my fault for not seeing that forever is in my own eyes!!
seen some glimpses before
and I thought my world would be perfect
was it just a dream
a wish on a star that I never actually reached
I held on to hope
kept searching for it in your smile
your eyes
wanted to believe the tears where joyful
and that you could be taught to wipe them away
my fault for believing in you
and my fault for not seeing that forever is in my own eyes!!
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Re: Forever
5th Feb 2013 2:02am
Short and sweet, liked this thoughtful little poem Gigi :) well done.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
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Re: Forever
5th Feb 2013 3:00am
always keep faith in yourself. everyone else is a 50/50 bet. nice write lady....
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5th Feb 2013 3:06am
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2013 3:35am
I am feelin these sad words girl, Really we on the same page at this point!!!
Well done
Well done

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Re: Forever
5th Feb 2013 5:52am
Anonymous
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5th Feb 2013 3:25pm
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Re: Forever
26th Feb 2013 11:13pm
I can sense your aggravation and angst over loving someone that didn't deserve it in the long run.
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