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My Own Love of Mankind's Beginning Story Eden Grove

     "But the Heavenly father told me so much, I definitely

remember we can all eat any fruit that we like snake, even you."

"Well here's a story in a story bitch that starts out with a

rhyme!" the snake hissed on harshly "To wash down that healing

fruit, how about a glass of Adam's wine. I'll only lick you, and

fetch the wine out of Adam, he's got the loving fruit." "Hold on

here..." Eve went on to say "I supposed to be able to do most

anything, within some small piss and limitations." "Hey, what's

up whore, you red skinned bitch? Where's the honor this time

remember me, my name's Adam?" Adam loved to kill his food in such

harsh ways, and also loved the sound of his own name. "What do

you say to me the Snake? This guy's full of haze!" "I'd rather

eat a spider." said Eve. "Well baby, I'll even give you one of my

ribs, or anything you want." "Look black man your white snake

fools me now, are you covered with mud of bark or mud of clover?

Where's the tax man, is it really you Adam?" Eve loved Adam "Too

many questions! Let's rake him over." the colorful snake

slithered and rattled back and forth. "Hold on here, I feel the

need for saving fruit from this worm." Adam walked away a little,

and picked up a soft apple. "I'm trying to remember the father's

name, it was just so long our only conversation, I still need to

ask him a question. NO!" Eve shouts as the snake bites Adam "Eat

the fruit to feel better if you want, you're still about to die."

the snake said something else it seemed to Adam, but he ate the

fruit to heal in stillness. "See look he's all ready better." the

snake licked Eve for a compliment "Yes I want his wine." "Where's

the snake?" "Where's your special pig?" "They're extinct!"

"Broken rules count in all different ways." Eve hissed with the

snake while holding Adam's wine, and the big cat shows  his

presence from behind the snakes rattle "I am going to eat you now

woman, try to enjoy it with yeah as if and right smiles all the

while." the snake bites Eve as Adam rises to his feet in a daze.

"Fight's on now you abusive man for I'm a child of nature!" the

gigantic tiger slashes Adam, and starts to chew on Eve drunk

under a Barron Tree. "Have fun with your life alone fruitcake."

says a spider to Adam as he leaves Eve's favorite grove to

walkabout until he passes. Until the Next Chapter...

This Edit of G*d's beginning for mankind by:
M.E.L.
Written by M-E_Ninny-L (michael edward lanier)
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