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SHOVE
They will come close.
Maybe touch my hand.
They will come near,
with questions to ask.
Before me stands,a body nude.
What I should,I never do.
"JORDAN WHY"!?She screams in love.
They have always pushed me,so now I shove.
Maybe touch my hand.
They will come near,
with questions to ask.
Before me stands,a body nude.
What I should,I never do.
"JORDAN WHY"!?She screams in love.
They have always pushed me,so now I shove.
Published 28th Jan 2013
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28th Jan 2013 6:47pm
Very brief almost lackluster..
Didnt quite understand what you were portraying.
Was it love? The lack of? So many questions..you should add onto this..
Didnt quite understand what you were portraying.
Was it love? The lack of? So many questions..you should add onto this..
30th Jan 2013 8:08am
3rd Feb 2013 7:46pm
I wrote this,while driving away from someone in a car,spur of the moment,so the lackluster,is almost perfect:)Thank you both so much:)
