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You only have to ask
You must think me scary
You must think me weird
Thinking about you
In the manner that I do
Away with another
Thinking of you the other
When your making love
Are you there or with another
I ask a lot of questions
Cause it's you I want to know
I want to know your season
So I can learn to do some pleasin
You never enquire about my other side
For you - you only have to ask
There's nothing I will hide
If you were really interested I'm that you would ask
You must think me weird
Thinking about you
In the manner that I do
Away with another
Thinking of you the other
When your making love
Are you there or with another
I ask a lot of questions
Cause it's you I want to know
I want to know your season
So I can learn to do some pleasin
You never enquire about my other side
For you - you only have to ask
There's nothing I will hide
If you were really interested I'm that you would ask
Published 27th Jan 2013
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28th Jan 2013 6:04am
I like this poem a lot, although I am a little confused about what you would want her to ask you. Maybe it's because I'm on my second glass of champagne, but I haven't figured it out yet. Is it that you have a girlfriend and want your other love interest to inquire about her? Or about another side of you? If you have time please clarify as I am really curious.
28th Jan 2013 12:14pm
Hi - thanks for your interest. I just want her to show an interest in me by wanting to know me learn about me as I want to her. I search for signs of interest - and yes we steal moments but she is very private and guarded and a lot of what I write try's to elicite a conversation. It's frustrating and at times it gets to me.
Thank you for taking the time to clarify this with me. I am very interested in this poem and your answer to my question and will ponder it some more.
Your answer gave me some insight and because I am also a very private person, I am now beginning to wonder in what way this could be frustrating to the people who love me. (Although I have an inclination as to what it could be.) Thank you for writing this very personal piece. :)
Your answer gave me some insight and because I am also a very private person, I am now beginning to wonder in what way this could be frustrating to the people who love me. (Although I have an inclination as to what it could be.) Thank you for writing this very personal piece. :)
