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The temporary and the permanent
Not everybody feels love,
or hate,
or depression
or anxiety
or angst
or betrayal
the only things
that everyone succumbs to
at one point or another in life is the temporary:
sleep (for everyone needs to sleep)
and the permanent: death, (for everyone dies.)
There is nothing else
that people can say
they do
exactly the same
or hate,
or depression
or anxiety
or angst
or betrayal
the only things
that everyone succumbs to
at one point or another in life is the temporary:
sleep (for everyone needs to sleep)
and the permanent: death, (for everyone dies.)
There is nothing else
that people can say
they do
exactly the same
Published 25th Jan 2013
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25th Jan 2013 6:55am
This feels very much like another way to say how alike we all are in the end. The brevity makes this that more impressive.
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25th Jan 2013 5:07pm
great little rite..very contemplative for one so young...but
'my' list
'ONLYs' that all have to do =
breathe,
eat,drink,
shit,piss,
(&then,of course,when any of the above systems fails, or yrfckn luck just runs out),
die.....
everything else seems optional & so full of enough subjective projections(i.e.'facts', opinions,beliefs,truth[s],reality,etc.~all emanating from the shallows of humanEgo~ to drive ourselves truly Mad over,(while, of course, pointing digi-fingers at The Others who are 'really-to-blame') & may well likely be.
'my' list
'ONLYs' that all have to do =
breathe,
eat,drink,
shit,piss,
(&then,of course,when any of the above systems fails, or yrfckn luck just runs out),
die.....
everything else seems optional & so full of enough subjective projections(i.e.'facts', opinions,beliefs,truth[s],reality,etc.~all emanating from the shallows of humanEgo~ to drive ourselves truly Mad over,(while, of course, pointing digi-fingers at The Others who are 'really-to-blame') & may well likely be.
26th Jan 2013 5:32pm
Your writing is very powerful. thank you for subscribing to my posts and welcome to DU I hope you find solace here
