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The Edge
On the edge you linger
Watching, knowing
Seeds of hope you're sowing
In my veins they're flowing
Taunting, teasing
Slowly breeding
Savaged soul so gently weeping
Twisting, turning
Spirit churning
Senses high and burning
Heart rate leaping
Pounding, beating
Fear retreating
While on the edge you linger
Waiting...
Watching, knowing
Seeds of hope you're sowing
In my veins they're flowing
Taunting, teasing
Slowly breeding
Savaged soul so gently weeping
Twisting, turning
Spirit churning
Senses high and burning
Heart rate leaping
Pounding, beating
Fear retreating
While on the edge you linger
Waiting...
Published 23rd Jan 2013
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24th Jan 2013 2:30am
24th Jan 2013 8:10pm
Anonymous
24th Jan 2013 7:03am
A lovely, lilting beat to this poem. "Seeds of hope you're sowing" is such a nice line & this: "Savaged soul so gently weeping." Very nicely written! :)
Carlene
Carlene
24th Jan 2013 8:09pm
29th Sep 2013 11:08pm
it's not just words, it's emotions. every author and writer has a way of expressing emotions, yours are clean, pure, honest and sincere.
love the way you say the things you say.
love the way you say the things you say.
1st Oct 2013 10:35pm
Sometimes when I write, there never seems enough words to describe, thanks again :)
