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Making pretty...
Come to me, my pet
Come and kneel in front of me
Lift your face and look at me
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Cream on your face, my pet
Base evenly applied
My hands soft and gentle
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Close your eyes, my pet
Eye shadow light and natural
Eye liner enhances your eyes
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Mascara, such long lashes,my pet
Blush to colour the cheeks
My hands sure and confident
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Look at me, my pet
Lipstick, red and moist
Your mouth full and sensual
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Come and kneel in front of me
Lift your face and look at me
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Cream on your face, my pet
Base evenly applied
My hands soft and gentle
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Close your eyes, my pet
Eye shadow light and natural
Eye liner enhances your eyes
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Mascara, such long lashes,my pet
Blush to colour the cheeks
My hands sure and confident
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Look at me, my pet
Lipstick, red and moist
Your mouth full and sensual
Let's make you pretty, my pet
Published 3rd Sep 2009
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3rd Sep 2009 3:59am
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11th Sep 2009 9:05am
the repitition of "my pet" and
"Let's make you pretty, my pet"
really works for me, it paints a picture in the mind, and the words are almost sensual when you read them.
Are you sure its just write and polish?
"Let's make you pretty, my pet"
really works for me, it paints a picture in the mind, and the words are almost sensual when you read them.
Are you sure its just write and polish?
11th Sep 2009 4:14pm
It is supposed to be sensual :) I enjoy your comments, they are so insightful Thank you
