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Broken
Part of me has broken.
Part of me has died.
Brutally ripped open.
I'm torn up inside.
I can feel it in my chest.
Depression kicking in.
I knew that I would try my best,
But I knew I wouldn't win...
Part of me has died.
Brutally ripped open.
I'm torn up inside.
I can feel it in my chest.
Depression kicking in.
I knew that I would try my best,
But I knew I wouldn't win...
Published 22nd Jan 2013
| Edited 27th Feb 2013
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- Edited 8th Jun 2024 1:45am
22nd Jan 2013 8:01pm
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19th Mar 2013 8:57pm
28th Mar 2013 00:57am
Short and sweet, but with a sour ending. It's a well written piece, but I have to admit that I am a total sucker for a poem that leaves itself wide open for interpretation, exactly as this one does.
