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hansel and gretel :the price of wondering

the two twins escaped from death
but just this time
they found a
chocolate house
they were delited
they eat walls ,floors and doors
but then
they heard somebody coming
they hid they saw a woman
with two kids,
the woman killed the kids
they saw everything but couldn't
look away then Gretel got up and asked
may i help the woman said yes finish them
she smiled
and got a butcher's knife but
then Hansel shouted Gretel no ! she turned
and ran towards
Hansel and chopped Hansel's head off
the white dress she had was covered in blood
she tuned to the woman and said was i good ?
the woman said yes very
she killed the kids that
were there


and waited and waited
for a person to spare  
Written by emoprincesslove
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