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Cutting.
Why do I do this?
Because you're stupid.
No one cares if you do.
Go for it.
It feels so good.
Slicing the skin.
Bringing blood.
Orgasmic.
Feeling again.
Feels good.
Feels great.
Feels amazing.
I promised I wouldn't do this again.
As I do it again.
And again.
And again.
I'm not numb anymore.
Well,
Until I stop
Bleeding.
This morbid monster laughs at me...
As
I
Slip
Under,
The
Surface
Yet
Again...
Help.
Because you're stupid.
No one cares if you do.
Go for it.
It feels so good.
Slicing the skin.
Bringing blood.
Orgasmic.
Feeling again.
Feels good.
Feels great.
Feels amazing.
I promised I wouldn't do this again.
As I do it again.
And again.
And again.
I'm not numb anymore.
Well,
Until I stop
Bleeding.
This morbid monster laughs at me...
As
I
Slip
Under,
The
Surface
Yet
Again...
Help.
Published 20th Jan 2013
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20th Jan 2013 3:28pm
22nd Jan 2013 2:32am
The format really added to the dramatics. i like your use of orgasmic and help, it shows your contradicting feelings very well. My heart goes out to you dear.
22nd Jan 2013 5:23am
4th Mar 2013 2:35am
Unfortunately no one understands cutting but the ones who cut... it truly is numbing and orgasmic for the mind.
"I promised I wouldn't do this again.
As I do it again.
And again.
And again."
This was so effective in enhancing the cut-after-cut "trance" (I don't know what else to call it). Just the spacing, the repetition, and everything.. it just really works well here. Your poem really says it like it is and I think it could really reach out to others who go through the same thing.
Thank you and
Great write
"I promised I wouldn't do this again.
As I do it again.
And again.
And again."
This was so effective in enhancing the cut-after-cut "trance" (I don't know what else to call it). Just the spacing, the repetition, and everything.. it just really works well here. Your poem really says it like it is and I think it could really reach out to others who go through the same thing.
Thank you and
Great write
13th Mar 2013 3:04am
2nd Apr 2013 3:38pm
wow this hit deep for me. I can relate to this so much. The structure and flow was flawless. Very well written. It's hard to stop cutting when we're so numb. We just want to feel again :( I hope you stop soon. Great write
