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Don't Hide
I saw the woman you have inside. I know you hide cause of all those tears, You hide cause of all those nights. You showed me how much you can care. You felt something that you thought was never there. Afraid of love but used to fear. So you shut it out playing games you'll regret. When you hide from it baby what do you expect. Don't hide... Don't hide yourself from this life. Don't make it hard to feel. Feel open to believe yes this is real. Don't make it easier to have a one night thrill. Just so when your home. You had a night, a night you didn't spend alone. Don't leave it all behind. Don't close your eyes and wish what you feel it what you hope to find.
Published 18th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2013 6:49am
Lovely effort, A S.
And welcome to this cool site!
Like the way you express your ideas.
Tidespotter
Ps. Quick query: how come you bunch up your writing so?
Is it intentional?
And welcome to this cool site!
Like the way you express your ideas.
Tidespotter
Ps. Quick query: how come you bunch up your writing so?
Is it intentional?
18th Jan 2013 1:59pm
Thank you very much for the comment. I don't bunch up my writing intentionally. I end getting into how it sounds so much I forget about that haha.
18th Jan 2013 7:18am
18th Jan 2013 9:11am
21st Jan 2013 11:24pm
I love this. It is so cute and nice to read. I like this line, "Afraid of love but used to fear. So you shut it out playing games you'll regret. When you hide from it baby what do you expect." You have a great way with words. I read it twice, it draws you to it. Thanks for sharing.
