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i may not like you better
i may not like you better
when i've come to know
what's really going on
inside your head for i know
how easily paradise is lost
when out of sight means
you're all but forgotten
i may not like you better
when i've come to know
the truth and i've
lost my last appeal but
i'll remember the moments
of magic not to mention
the gentleness of your touch
when i've come to know
what's really going on
inside your head for i know
how easily paradise is lost
when out of sight means
you're all but forgotten
i may not like you better
when i've come to know
the truth and i've
lost my last appeal but
i'll remember the moments
of magic not to mention
the gentleness of your touch
Published 17th Jan 2013
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18th Jan 2013 1:24am
Dearest Amazon-You sure know how to make my heart smile big time. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I'm honored you feel that way.
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18th Jan 2013 00:06am
Faith, I love this piece. It's magic! If you're not a novelist, already...then imho I think your pen should 'hit the road' running!! Truly a beautiful poem, dear lady.
18th Jan 2013 1:29am
Awww, you are so kind to me, Carlene. Thank you for your lovely comments. Actually, I have written a novella about a girl coming of age in New Orleans. I've considered posting some chapters on here but just haven't done it yet. Still toying with the idea.
18th Jan 2013 2:36am
Ya know what I hand found? Better off not knowing most the time. Lol! Like this a lot. :)
18th Jan 2013 2:39am
