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China Doll
China doll
Geisha dress
White face
Jade eyes
Tiptoes
So sweet
On broken
Feet
No arms
Only sleeves
Smooth, free
Flowing water
Gentle breeze
Winter snow
Forest walker
Silent shadow
Tree stalker
Naked nun
Moonbeam
Dreamer
Nirvana
Enlightened
Secret keeper
Geisha dress
White face
Jade eyes
Tiptoes
So sweet
On broken
Feet
No arms
Only sleeves
Smooth, free
Flowing water
Gentle breeze
Winter snow
Forest walker
Silent shadow
Tree stalker
Naked nun
Moonbeam
Dreamer
Nirvana
Enlightened
Secret keeper
Published 15th Jan 2013
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18th Jan 2013 7:01pm
This is definitely an interesting piece. The way you wrote this is almost like a list of different words put together describing the item. It reads as if there is someone blind nearby asking you to describe it. Some of the terms are quite literal and some of them, the reader can tell that you're using metaphors. Well done. :)
18th Jan 2013 10:18pm
