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Here at arms width
Never hold it so close to your chest
Run or fall too fast with it
Because the deeper it's forced
If you let it dig in
The more it's engorged
When pulled out; will sting
And that's merely human weakness
We must find comfort in some others heart
All is good, till they come down from it
And try rip it back out
You're here at arms width, so please before we begin;
don't hold it so close to your chest.
Published 14th Jan 2013
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14th Jan 2013 10:22pm
I thought the last sentence didn't
flow as much as the others.
Though I loved the rest;
especially enjoyed:
The more it's engorged
When pulled out; will sting
Very well put together.
flow as much as the others.
Though I loved the rest;
especially enjoyed:
The more it's engorged
When pulled out; will sting
Very well put together.
14th Jan 2013 10:28pm
Thank you. It appears to be the end of a very long writers block :) So keep your eye out for more from me. x
