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Peeking out behind glazed eyes
She sits there tracing her veins with a knife
contemplating ending her life
so sick of the pain that's inside
she can no longer hide
she is peeking out behind glazed eyes
lost her idenity with those hateful lies
feels like there is no hope
can't find a better way to cope
but to use the razor blade kiss
this time she begs not to miss
wishing the crimson river will flow
wishing her heart to slow
tell she can be painless at last
and lose the thoughts of her past
contemplating ending her life
so sick of the pain that's inside
she can no longer hide
she is peeking out behind glazed eyes
lost her idenity with those hateful lies
feels like there is no hope
can't find a better way to cope
but to use the razor blade kiss
this time she begs not to miss
wishing the crimson river will flow
wishing her heart to slow
tell she can be painless at last
and lose the thoughts of her past
Published 6th Aug 2010
| Edited 8th Aug 2010
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6th Aug 2010 10:47am
8th Aug 2010 7:58am
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7th Aug 2010 4:15am
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8th Aug 2010 8:00am
Thanks the capitals are because i am writting on my ipod and it automatically does that
7th Aug 2010 2:07pm
Very emotionally raw poem there :) There are a couple of spelling mistakes - You put Viens nwhich is spelt Veins, Beggs is Begs, and Loose the thoughts should be lose the thoughts. But other than that, it is very well written and I can identify with the subject - good work!
8th Aug 2010 8:03am
I think the emotionally raw Is a compliment so thanks and I was writting when I was really tired so I wasn't thinking about spelling so much. But thanks for the corrections :)
