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On Your Side, Suicide.
How many times will you fall for sins charms?
You’ve been keeping tally marks on the inside of your arms.
No one has listened to your depression calls.
No one has the time to recover your falls.
They’re not sorry for fading away,
They’re sorry for the words they will never say.
How this is not how you should behave.
You’ve been being your own slave,
Whipping your back for things you can’t control.
Digging yourself into a hellhole.
Your life came and left, like a mist.
I’m sorry for ignoring the tally marks on your wrist.
You’ve been keeping tally marks on the inside of your arms.
No one has listened to your depression calls.
No one has the time to recover your falls.
They’re not sorry for fading away,
They’re sorry for the words they will never say.
How this is not how you should behave.
You’ve been being your own slave,
Whipping your back for things you can’t control.
Digging yourself into a hellhole.
Your life came and left, like a mist.
I’m sorry for ignoring the tally marks on your wrist.
Published 4th Aug 2010
| Edited 5th Nov 2010
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4th Aug 2010 12:29pm
Interesting and compelling read. Wish I knew who was "speaking"; the principle? the cuts? a third entity? Good effort here for this reader. Kudos.
4th Aug 2010 7:59pm
24th Dec 2011 8:52am
this one is so poignant....i loved the lines...every line had to say so much...a good write indeed...:)
17th Feb 2013 2:36pm
