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Spite Sites (a collaboration with 13blueyes13)
We should be here to read or write
poems,prose,lyrics,whatever
sharing our feelings and thoughts
love,anger,sorrow,laughter,concern
sharing observations and ideas
knowledge is better than gold
we should be here for these reasons
some of us leave comments on poems
helpful criticism
kudos to the style
kudos to a poem's message
maybe you can totally feel it
or maybe totally disagree with it
but able to back up any remark
we are here for these reasons as well
but some come here just to start shit
annoying as hell and pissing off many
spite based opinions only show hate
useless comments only show ignorance
never mind the banality of it all
spite is an ignorant form of hate
if spiteful criticism's all you got
you're a self-centered douche
and you show it well
not everything is all about you
so pull your fingers out of your ass
and write your words where they belong
on toilet paper
now flush
poems,prose,lyrics,whatever
sharing our feelings and thoughts
love,anger,sorrow,laughter,concern
sharing observations and ideas
knowledge is better than gold
we should be here for these reasons
some of us leave comments on poems
helpful criticism
kudos to the style
kudos to a poem's message
maybe you can totally feel it
or maybe totally disagree with it
but able to back up any remark
we are here for these reasons as well
but some come here just to start shit
annoying as hell and pissing off many
spite based opinions only show hate
useless comments only show ignorance
never mind the banality of it all
spite is an ignorant form of hate
if spiteful criticism's all you got
you're a self-centered douche
and you show it well
not everything is all about you
so pull your fingers out of your ass
and write your words where they belong
on toilet paper
now flush
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