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Spite Sites (a collaboration with 13blueyes13)

We should be here to read or write            
poems,prose,lyrics,whatever                                                      
sharing our feelings and thoughts                                                      
love,anger,sorrow,laughter,concern                                                        
sharing observations and ideas    
knowledge is better than gold                                                     
we should be here for these reasons                                                        
some of us leave comments on poems                                                        
helpful criticism                                                      
kudos to the style                                                      
kudos to a poem's message          
maybe you can totally feel it                                                        
or maybe totally disagree with it                                                    
but able to back up any remark                                                  
we are here for these reasons as well                                                  
but some come here just to start shit                                        
annoying as hell and pissing off many                                        
spite based opinions only show hate                    
useless comments only show ignorance        
never mind the banality of it all                            
spite is an ignorant form of hate    
if spiteful criticism's all you got    
you're a self-centered douche                                
and you show it well                                  
not everything is all about you        
so pull your fingers out of your ass                     
and write your words where they belong
on toilet paper        
now flush  
Written by bonblozmecraz (Blondie Oz)
Published | Edited 15th Sep 2013
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