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He Loved Me Like...
He loved me like the winter snows,
That blanketed the land,
Snows heavy with serenity,
Undisturbed by the sounds of man
Snows that whispered of mysteries,
And sang with winter frost,
It shone beneath the glacial rays,
A hideous forewarning to the price his love would cost
That blanketed the land,
Snows heavy with serenity,
Undisturbed by the sounds of man
Snows that whispered of mysteries,
And sang with winter frost,
It shone beneath the glacial rays,
A hideous forewarning to the price his love would cost
Published 9th Jan 2013
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9th Jan 2013 9:04pm
Does That Mean He Left Your Heart cold? I Really like this, Just that last line kinda threw me through a loop. I Wish i could write such great poetry with so few words.
Well thank you. And to your question: yes, in a sense. He did. Its just, snow is beautiful, mesmerizing and peaceful, at least when all is right. But the glitter of its presence is the forewarning to pain and cold and solitude. Its its own contradiction or maybe it would be more correct to call it its own paradox.
13th Jan 2013 3:38am
