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good or evil
in the middle of the night I met the devil.....
yes last night I met the beast, the most evil creature on the face of earth, I met evil......
last night I met God......
I mean when I met the devil I also met God, I met the creator of heaven and earth.I met good.....last night I was caught in a dilemma, I was stuck inbetween, I was in a pisition were I had to chose, Good, evil,God, or the devil.......
last night the devil whispered into my left ear........
son if heaven is the opposite of hell please do tell me why is it not cold.....
he said when hell is hot take a scotch shot let the ecstasy slide sweep you across from shore to shore.......
he told me to listen and listen close so i i i i..........
I cut left to stick on the right were I heard the Gods contradicting by spitting tight raps and the oracles were nodding heads taking side..........
I was told in this battle of good and evil I should never ne a pawn for the devil who manoeuvres to keep the truth from my reach.......
the devil keept singing lalabies to keep my third eye asleep, but Gods remained in contra and the oracles increased their high toned angelic pitch, and with such an angelic rhythm I was set free from this virtual prison..........
yes last night I met the beast, the most evil creature on the face of earth, I met evil......
last night I met God......
I mean when I met the devil I also met God, I met the creator of heaven and earth.I met good.....last night I was caught in a dilemma, I was stuck inbetween, I was in a pisition were I had to chose, Good, evil,God, or the devil.......
last night the devil whispered into my left ear........
son if heaven is the opposite of hell please do tell me why is it not cold.....
he said when hell is hot take a scotch shot let the ecstasy slide sweep you across from shore to shore.......
he told me to listen and listen close so i i i i..........
I cut left to stick on the right were I heard the Gods contradicting by spitting tight raps and the oracles were nodding heads taking side..........
I was told in this battle of good and evil I should never ne a pawn for the devil who manoeuvres to keep the truth from my reach.......
the devil keept singing lalabies to keep my third eye asleep, but Gods remained in contra and the oracles increased their high toned angelic pitch, and with such an angelic rhythm I was set free from this virtual prison..........
Published 8th Jan 2013
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8th Jan 2013 8:13am
8th Jan 2013 8:23am
8th Jan 2013 8:30am
I can't see any or think of any improvements:) I think your right unless someone else spots one
12th Jan 2013 00:47am
13th Jan 2013 3:52pm
Generally like this. Rooms for correction:
For 'pisition were' - 'position where'
For 'ne' - 'be' (before 'a pawn for the devil')
For 'keept' - 'kept'
For 'lalabies' - 'lullabies' (unless this is an expression in Zimbabwean English)
For 'pisition were' - 'position where'
For 'ne' - 'be' (before 'a pawn for the devil')
For 'keept' - 'kept'
For 'lalabies' - 'lullabies' (unless this is an expression in Zimbabwean English)
