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Flight........
(penned by rain c and music m)
Chasing a snow white dove through the sky
I am but a little blackbird, this kindred I feel between you and I
I try so hard to keep up with you in graceful flight
yet as I follow your path
They catch me in their snare
I am bound; they hold me tight
And from teary eyes, I watch your ascent
towards the sun I believe it was meant
for me to see
the wonder of your plight
To force a loose
and fight the good fight.
To loose the snare
of their strongest hold
and if by death
I gain back my soul............
You......
are my wind beneath my wings.
You are my tangible air
Hope....
........when the plight of soaring
is difficult to bare.
Smiling at your efforts of holding on;
I wished that you could see
That your struggles are done in vain
No need to chase
It is YOU, who carries me
Though my climb is steep,
you elevate me to rise
Engulfed in love,
taken to new highs
Sun basking against translucent feathers
Wipe away your tears
Feel us ascending, we journey together
Beyond the sky, there is no end
Even in death, we shall but live again
Only the purest love to behold
Grants you access to my soul
Published 8th Jan 2013
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8th Jan 2013 2:48am
this is simply beautiful...
an xpression of kindred souls bound through pain ...and kindreds spirit....nice you guys.
Fire
an xpression of kindred souls bound through pain ...and kindreds spirit....nice you guys.
Fire
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8th Jan 2013 4:19am
On a total smooth glide! If not for the two birds involved, it would be impossible to even guess at who came up with what in this---not sure it matters anyway. A wonderful synergy here, like Rodgers and Hammerstein, or even Rogers and Astaire.
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8th Jan 2013 4:56am
It was an honor to INK with you!
You make it so easy! Thank You, Archie! :)
btw...The imagery is BEAUTIFUL! Perfect for this read!
You make it so easy! Thank You, Archie! :)
btw...The imagery is BEAUTIFUL! Perfect for this read!
8th Jan 2013 11:57am
Thank you Rain. It is very easy to pen with a writer of your caliber. You are so intuitive......so tuned in to my plight.
"You......
are my wind beneath my wings.
You are my tangible air
Hope....
........when the plight of soaring
is difficult to bare."
I really love that line most of all.
"You......
are my wind beneath my wings.
You are my tangible air
Hope....
........when the plight of soaring
is difficult to bare."
I really love that line most of all.
8th Jan 2013 3:57pm
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