Microbial Life Form

this is intense

Oh wow! Thanks

very meaningful...very nice

Why thank you very much.

A very romantic and scientific poem. Held my interest well, I'm not one for love poems, but you married it well with the microbial theme, which I find very interesting.  
 
For being "formless" I did see a bit of a form going on, then a deviation from that form in the second segment where you lengthened the lines. I like the plummeting pattern you had going on in the first segment, and by widening it in the second part it makes the writer stop and feel that there is importance here, as if to be taken more seriously, a lead up to the climax, then the break through to the purpose of the poem. Nicely done.  
 
There are a few rough spots (These are just personal preferences mainly so feel free to disregard) that I did see that are easily enough fixed:
 
"Meaningless life forms but  
In having no meaning I find"  
 
My problem here is the "but placed at the end of the first line, it makes it seem almost sloppy and takes away from the strength of the prior three words, I suggest writing it like:
 
"Meaningless life forms  
But  
In having no meaning I find"  
 
That way the "But" causes the appropriate amount of trepidation without taking away from "Meaningless life forms" allowing you to ponder the uniqueness of that line.
 
"I have no eyes I  
Have no voice"
 
Same issue, just drop the I down so it's "I have no voice"  
 
Unless you are concerned by the amount of "I" started lines in a row, them perhaps rethink that part all together:
 
"I have no mouth  
I have no eyes I  
Have no voice  
I have no purpose here  
I'm just floating"  
 
"I have no mouth
I have no eyes
My voice is forgotten
No purpose here
Just floating"
 
Or something along those lines.  
 
"Through eternity  
But right here  
Right now  
We're all just alone"
 
Here I don't think but works as well as it had before, this is a particularly beautiful part or your poem, and "But" is almost gruff sounding, I suggest but's delicate cousin "yet" instead. Also, dropping the "just" makes it more fluid as well.  
 
"Through eternity  
Yet right here  
Right now  
We're all alone"  
 
Last one:
 
"Wait to reconnect with me  
Let the rhythm bring you home  
Tell me you will wait for me  
Be patient  
I'm coming home"
 
"home" and "home", is a bit redundant so close together, I suggest changing the first one so your last line makes more of a definitive impact.  
 
That's all I have for this poem, It's truly lovely.  
 
AlwaysCaliban
 

Ah thank you very much. The weird phrasing with putting I and But at the end was meant more for the flow but I totally see what you mean. I'll probably do an edit on this one. Thanks for the critique.

You're welcome. Sorry it took so long, doubtless, the other two will as well. haha

That's totally fine. Take your time.

absolutely love it....

Thank you :)

wonderfully written

Thank you very much.