memento mori

This is beautiful...that word 'enough' is like a great fall, a great weight, a great stop...it says best what can't really be put into words, I think. You always write such powerful pieces.

thank you merda. i admit this poem was the hardest to write about my grandmama because the time i wrote the poem i felt so much anger and disbelief. i couldn't accept the fact that i would never see her again..

I'm very sorry about your grandmama opheliac, it's tough, losing someone close...but you've used all that feeling to weave such beautiful heartfelt words, which I think is a great way to deal with all the difficult stuff in life. x

thanks a lot merda you're so kind about my work.. yes my grandmama was and still is my dearest =]]

I agree with Merda; this is simply gorgeous, opheliac. In another poem, the Shakespeare quote would seem a bit like plagiarism, but here it works perfectly. Almost made me cry, though perhaps I'm just in a morbid mood. But, either way, this is an incredible piece of verse. Haunting and sombre and just, well, beautiful. Nothing more I can say. The only suggestion I can think of making is that you add another dot to your ellipses, but that's just me being picky.

i don't think is a plagiarism because i wrote who the author of the quote was. i didn't say it belonged to me. yes i agree with the dots i should have added another one! my bad thanks a lot for taking time and read my poem also many thanks for "following" me =]]

Your Masterpiece!!!

wow thanks anandosen =]]