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loveghost story for no body
what love
made love
give/gave/given
away far'way
stutt'rin[old]lonefool
no one saw alldaylong
rightout there where
[for]all to see & still
as yet unseen soaking up
barechested sunlight in
front of all but no one
see[a]damnthing...pickin
up beautiful bones but
th'womens be frightened &
all wee mens just fcknstupid,
they huddled in coats, 'me',
th'ghost near'naked, walkin
in th'water poundin surf--
but 'i' must not be here, can
not be here will not be here
[f'long] / invisible in para'dise /
apparent[t'be'an]apparition /
13th year of 13th miracle of
13th ghost'lucky lucky13sur'vivor
...stepped over wit
out a batting eye....
what love
made love
dear love, (wherethfuck?whythfuck?)
do not know how
ghost draws'breath any more...
just billows of
finecigarsmoke
when no one is looking / but
thenagain, none'd look (for'seein')
[in] any way
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made love
give/gave/given
away far'way
stutt'rin[old]lonefool
no one saw alldaylong
rightout there where
[for]all to see & still
as yet unseen soaking up
barechested sunlight in
front of all but no one
see[a]damnthing...pickin
up beautiful bones but
th'womens be frightened &
all wee mens just fcknstupid,
they huddled in coats, 'me',
th'ghost near'naked, walkin
in th'water poundin surf--
but 'i' must not be here, can
not be here will not be here
[f'long] / invisible in para'dise /
apparent[t'be'an]apparition /
13th year of 13th miracle of
13th ghost'lucky lucky13sur'vivor
...stepped over wit
out a batting eye....
what love
made love
dear love, (wherethfuck?whythfuck?)
do not know how
ghost draws'breath any more...
just billows of
finecigarsmoke
when no one is looking / but
thenagain, none'd look (for'seein')
[in] any way
XXXXXdkzk2013pxtrstoo2013xxxxxxxxxx
Published 6th Jan 2013
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7th Jan 2013 1:46pm
Truly magnificent poem, brother. As you can tell I too have been practicing this being invisible. I'll stop back and comment on some of the great stuff you've been writing when I can manage to get all of my atoms in one place again.
