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were to now?
Lonley days, sleepless nights,
Without you nothings bright,
Cant look forward to my days,
All I see is lots of greys,
Tears they fill my eyes always,
My friends help dry them, so I say,
You, I cant forget the pain,
Feel my life is more insane,
Love is cruel, I see that now,
My life I wish from now to flower,
You back with me in my life,
Take from me that sharpened knife,
Wish to have you back for ever,
This sadness I want now for never.
Without you nothings bright,
Cant look forward to my days,
All I see is lots of greys,
Tears they fill my eyes always,
My friends help dry them, so I say,
You, I cant forget the pain,
Feel my life is more insane,
Love is cruel, I see that now,
My life I wish from now to flower,
You back with me in my life,
Take from me that sharpened knife,
Wish to have you back for ever,
This sadness I want now for never.
Published 29th Jul 2010
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30th Jul 2010 00:00am
30th Jul 2010 4:56am
thankyou for the comment, the truth always helps write what we need I feel.
31st Jul 2010 4:42am
I like the flow of it. Id like to see your mind in another place other then heart break. I understand you use this to cope, but id be interested in how creative you could be in other areas. Let me know if u do.
31st Jul 2010 9:49pm
thanx for your comment, I will try to get away from the heart ache stuff, I feel my coping mechanism is in writing to help me move on, which I will soon hopefully. onwards and upwards so my friends say :-)
