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Claws
My far sight spies the small prey
scurry hurry to hide
Gliding on currents
uplifted by forces unseen
The moment of strike
swift and painful
Claws outstretched
Snatched from your scampering
A bloody mess
You are invited to
The feast of claws
*submitted to poetry competition Souls of Another Breed
scurry hurry to hide
Gliding on currents
uplifted by forces unseen
The moment of strike
swift and painful
Claws outstretched
Snatched from your scampering
A bloody mess
You are invited to
The feast of claws
*submitted to poetry competition Souls of Another Breed
Published 31st Dec 2012
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2012 10:54pm
lynnlovesmetal
A great write and I very much enjoyed the read. Great wording and I love the last two lines, in particular! :)
Carlene
A great write and I very much enjoyed the read. Great wording and I love the last two lines, in particular! :)
Carlene
31st Dec 2012 11:00pm
1st Jan 2013 8:36pm
