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Plastic World
Excuse Me For Being So Real
For Being Me And Speaking
My Mind And What i Feel
Excuse Me For Having a Soul
That Cant Be Controled
Excuse Me For Not Being Like You
And Being So Fake
i Only Wish i Was Like You
Excuse Me For Showing Anger
'When i Know i Lost Something Important
i'll Try Be More Lik You i'll Try To Be Better
Excuse Me For Actually Having A Mind
And Using it When i Need it
Unlike You Letting it Rot in The Sand of Time
Letting Other People Think For You
Excuse Me For Not Knowing That Being Real Was A Crime
i Swear i Didnt Know
i Wasnt Allow To Have a Soul
i Didnt Know i Had To Sell iT
To Gain Flase Friends
Just To Feel A Flase Sense of Not Being Alone
Please Forgive Me For Not Living in Your Plastic World
Where Nothing is What it Seems
Only People Trying To For Fill There Own Needs
o Please Forgive Me And
Excuse Me For Lving in a Better World
Excuse Me For Being So Dam Real
And Being Able To Speak My Mind
And Always Say What i Feel
While You Cant
Please Excuse Me
-AJ
For Being Me And Speaking
My Mind And What i Feel
Excuse Me For Having a Soul
That Cant Be Controled
Excuse Me For Not Being Like You
And Being So Fake
i Only Wish i Was Like You
Excuse Me For Showing Anger
'When i Know i Lost Something Important
i'll Try Be More Lik You i'll Try To Be Better
Excuse Me For Actually Having A Mind
And Using it When i Need it
Unlike You Letting it Rot in The Sand of Time
Letting Other People Think For You
Excuse Me For Not Knowing That Being Real Was A Crime
i Swear i Didnt Know
i Wasnt Allow To Have a Soul
i Didnt Know i Had To Sell iT
To Gain Flase Friends
Just To Feel A Flase Sense of Not Being Alone
Please Forgive Me For Not Living in Your Plastic World
Where Nothing is What it Seems
Only People Trying To For Fill There Own Needs
o Please Forgive Me And
Excuse Me For Lving in a Better World
Excuse Me For Being So Dam Real
And Being Able To Speak My Mind
And Always Say What i Feel
While You Cant
Please Excuse Me
-AJ
Published 26th Jul 2010
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2010 4:50am
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2012 5:10pm
A.J.,
That's sort of the taste it left, plastic. I see you write on the moment and would rather not re-read or spell check or any of those other things. Which is all well and good, but to be taken seriously about your craft, might be something to reconsider...or not....other than that your writing left me with the urge to want to know this other person. So you did accomplish that. Don't get me wrong, you did peak much interest with what you have written and I did enjoy the read.
tornado
That's sort of the taste it left, plastic. I see you write on the moment and would rather not re-read or spell check or any of those other things. Which is all well and good, but to be taken seriously about your craft, might be something to reconsider...or not....other than that your writing left me with the urge to want to know this other person. So you did accomplish that. Don't get me wrong, you did peak much interest with what you have written and I did enjoy the read.
tornado
