deepundergroundpoetry.com
Just a puppet Of society
Storming through this at such a fast pace
Knowing I'm not only in it for the chase
We are running along the sands of time
It's silent, our feelings are quietly mimed
Stepping through the same old door
To justify all you've done before
Hiding the truth only from your own mind
Remembering that you were one of a kind
But society took from you your freedom, your wings
Now you're just a lifeless puppet on their strings!
Knowing I'm not only in it for the chase
We are running along the sands of time
It's silent, our feelings are quietly mimed
Stepping through the same old door
To justify all you've done before
Hiding the truth only from your own mind
Remembering that you were one of a kind
But society took from you your freedom, your wings
Now you're just a lifeless puppet on their strings!
Published 29th Dec 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 3
reads 733
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
30th Dec 2012 4:39am
great pull of words strings, what would you think of forgetting rather than remembering? As we dance the jig of our en-slavers, our identity fades from colors so free, into a mud bath of regrets that we grab onto the common bond called kinship. To stand out from the crowd makes us a moving target, this is what this cool poem is telling me! anyway, there is always strings attached to everything, even humility! vart@rt
30th Dec 2012 5:12pm
Hey , thanks for the comment , but actually , I prefer remembering rather than forgetting , because in order to have amazing memories you need bad happenings to overcome or just bad happenings in comparison :) because in the end blending in once in a while is what reminds us that we NEED to stand out :) Love your aDd on btw :) thanks again
30th Dec 2012 4:22pm
Thanks for the comment , but I'd remember rather than to forget, because in order to have great memories on needs the remembrance of bad happenings..... And to lose yourself in the grasp of society so that you can have the satisfaction of rising up out of it :) ........ But I really LOVE your Add on!!!!!!!! Thanx :)
